Sandking wrote:- scene seems to be too evenly lit (colours seem a bit dim) and thus flat at lacking at east of dynamics; I think that making it lit from side like from a window would be best (showing shadows in the background and details of the front model
- I don't like composition here especially foreground/background relations; background distracts a bit - making foreground lit more and background in more shades could be helpful but also moving camera angle showing the little train on wall's background, not on edge of shelf would outline it more making viewer focus right on the little model (and maybe, but just mabe - playing with DOF would make some things here happen)
Poncho wrote:what happens when you use not dougal2's OfficeC exr. but a different one? dougal's exr feels/looks a bit too yellow I think, which makes the whole scene matte/yellow.
edit: or try to change the exr to more white??
Radiance wrote:Hi, very nice, detailed work and nice athmosphere
One small crit would be the too warm white in your image, something i notice in all your renders.
dunno if this is intentional (again), but it bothers me a bit
could it be a wrong configuration of your monitor/colour reproduction ?
attached a version that looks more correct on my display...
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