doll in shelf(simple is beautiful)

[jester98741]

simpleWIP

Hi
this is my WIP for the new contest
basically I want to do a doll in a shop window.
I haven't really decide a title for it.
think I'll leave that for later


Any critiques are welcome

and sorry for my english

[binarycortex]

That's very nice.

[giuliojiang]

It's really nice! I suggest a title: Read, Doll!

You should render for a little longer to get a clearer picture.

[jester98741]

add some texture and a textured plane for reflection.
I will add more toy in the shelf and more stuff in the reflection

@giuliojiang:thanks for the suggestion. that sounds nice

[jester98741]

after some tries
I gave up using textured plane for the reflection.
because the shadow looks weird and it required some works.
so instead I try to use a HDR in the background.

The problem I have now is there are too few people in the image I found.
I want a more crowdy street.
So I need to find a way to add people in.
I'm thinking about again using textured plane.
will do some test later.

any suggestion?

[Abel]

I'd forget about the people, fix the smoothing on the frame and call it a day, it's looking very nice!

[binarycortex]

I'd forget about the people, fix the smoothing on the frame and call it a day, it's looking very nice!

+1

[jester98741]

yeah I guess the people are not necessary
I think I'll focus on the model and texture for now

[giuliojiang]

Really nice! I think this picture is ok, you don't need people. Why don't you put a small light inside so that it looks like a shop window?

[jester98741]

Really nice! I think this picture is ok, you don't need people. Why don't you put a small light inside so that it looks like a shop window?

I would say it is too early that the shop isn't open yet
anyway that really is a good idea to bring more focus on the doll.

I will try that later, adding some light in the shelf or above the shelf